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Crystal Rivers - More Than Human

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i'm experimenting with foreground elements (things in front of the character) so hence the fog covering her, not that there is much to be covered (insert invisible joke here)

i was inspired to do this drawing after seeing :iconyooi:'s [link](invisible girl). i used the bandages idea, and i say, it came out great.

*note, i did not steal :iconyooi:'s character. i have my own character that can become invisible, and this is her. i simply used the badges idea. i did not steal the character*


[link](invisible girl) (c) :iconyooi:
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i plan on using this character in my story, more than human.


Name: Crystal Rivers
Nickname: Crystal Clear
Age: 14
Mutation: Invisibility
Birthday: January 28
zodiac sign: Aquarius
blood type: A
hair color: Blond
gender: female
Role: Hero


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1. Crystal is able to turn invisible because she emits energy that refracts light.

2. Crystal can turn other things invisible besides her clothes by casting the energy on the thing she wants to turn invisible, however, this takes lots of practice. when crystal first got her mutation, she could only cast the energy right on her skin, only making her body invisible.

3. because she uses energy to turn invisible, she can turn parts of her body invisible while the rest still says visible.

4. Crystal was on amber's soccer team along with may. this makes her and may 2 of the few member of double helix amber knew before she got mutated.

5. because the energy refracts light around her body, crystal can't see herself when shes invisible because no light is hitting her body and going into her eye (i know one day someone is going to ask this, so i'm just going to answer it now)

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Crystal Rivers-more than human (c) me :iconinkblot123:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I am going to be quite frank here. Did you use guide lines?

It's ok to say yes because I use them too. I like how you have it but then again I dont. You need to work on the faces.

That is the MAIN thing I see right now.

The mouth is to far from the side, I can kinda tell if its a smile with one corner lifted up but its is like someone took her mouth ripped it off and re-attached it to the side of her face...the mouth has to stay under the nose, not to the side....thats why we have dimples!!!

Use the power of dimples to show more mouth emotion.

and her NECK it is not needed to be that thick. Yeah the idea is to show that it connects behind the ear but not way behind it. that is just a manly neck..not feminie at all the eyes are pretty good, very girly with an almost childish quality to them.

Her breasts are misplaced though...you have them facing forward when the should be placed with one more facing to the side than the other...not both facing forward....

The hair is to flat. I don't like to right bad or at least not so nice critiques but the hair the shading and highlighting are flat. they have no dimensions whatsoever...that needs to be worked on. Go on to YouTube and look up hair coloring techniques and watch a bunch of those to get a basic idea of what you need to do. This will help you big time. And hair is almost more fluid and not so clumped together and pointed. You need to add a fiew free flowing strands because that is how hair is...not triangular ish. I like the mist/fog very mysterious and giving the idea that she has a invisible body.

Other than that you are getting better! I love the hands and feet!!!

Keeping working hard and you will surely get there!